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Consequences of a Fall  by Dreamflower 228 Review(s)
AlReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 4/2/2026
Whoa! That ending was unexpected! I hope that epiphany changed her for the better!

TariReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 10/24/2007
This was an abosulutely wonderful tale. I shall have to read more of your writings. (This comes from one who loves the Elves the most.)

Tari

LarnerReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/23/2006
So, the visitor is Pippin. Well, this was well deserved, and she has no idea just what she was saved from or what he survived.

Dear Pippin, and the poor lasses, with such a mother. She is an idiot, though, and deserved to be eaten by a troll if anyone did. Heh!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/23/2006
And all too soon Paladin Took will be Thain, and Pippin will have that role after him. Poor Pippin--but I think in time he'll come to like the Great Smials after all.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 21 on 8/23/2006
I see that Dora's much vaunted Kindness resides in the breast of Meriadoc Brandybuck, and I love him for it. And a nice bit of gentleness after the angst of the last few chapters.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 20 on 8/23/2006
Most certainly Begonia deserves some happiness with her own family at her time in life. As for Hyacinth getting her--I shudder at the prospect. Yecch!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 19 on 8/23/2006
Slough off the fool, Reggie. You don't deserve misery of her sort!

Lovely that all should fall to nothing for her, and that Merry gets his desired visit with Pippin.

And poor Pearl--stuck with those awful pearls. I'd have been tempted to strangle Ferumbras with them, myself.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/23/2006
And from here on in we get to see the silly fool destroying her remaining life with her husband, do we? She is only fortunate Primrose's arrival kept her from becoming a murderess.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 17 on 8/23/2006
She was saved by the knock on the door moreso than Pippin himself, I think, although she'd never think of it that way.

Well, well done. And love Lindelea's "flash-forward," I do.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 16 on 8/22/2006
Oh, Hyacinth, you vindictive Hobbitess of little worth! No wonder Reginard would wish you elsewhere--you and everyone else!

And the Thain has cleared Pearl's name! Wonderful for him. Poor Pearl!

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