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Peregrin and Diamond  by Pearl Took 5 Review(s)
Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/27/2006
Uh-oh. Looks like Pippin is more injured than he realizes. Diamond was very brave to ride the pony the way she did. Seems like she is good in an emergency and so is her brother. Can't wait for more, but I will. I am enjoying it very much!

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/26/2006
"Had he lost sight of who he was? He was seeking a hobbit lass who wanted to know him, but did he know himself anymore?

This is excellent, Pearl! The best way to find one's other half is to know the first half (yourself). Loved it!

My...I see you've changed a bit more things in this chapter! I so enjoyed the former version, but I absolutely LOVE this one! It flows so smoothly from one scene to the next, everything seeming so real. As I read your tales, I always have this sense of actually being there--witnessing first-hand the events taking place. This shows what a gifted writer you truly are. :-)

I thinks its adorable that Diamond dreams of Pippin in her fantasies and is pretty much already in love with him.

I am so looking forward to the next update!


Pippinfan
p.s. Apologise for the late review; I'll tell you why on our next chat.


Author Reply: Thank you so much, Pippinfan :)

I'm so glad you are enjoying this as much as you did before :)

Don't worry about the late review - I love getting them whenever :)

Elanor SilmariënReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/24/2006
Oh no!!! Poor Pippin! I am so glad that Diamond came when she did, though. This was a very exciting chapter, can't wait to see more!
God bless,
Elanor

Author Reply: Thank you, Elanor :) Hopefully things will be getting posted at a fairly regular pace. Thank you for responding :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/24/2006
Aha--one whose imaginings will in the end become reality. Lovely! And so practical as well!

Author Reply: "Fairy tales can come true, it can happen to you, if you're young at heart."

It is a practical solution to an age old problem ;)

Thank you, Larner, for reading and responding!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/24/2006
Well - he clonked his head, but still remembered who he was! And Diamond knows him. But he might require a bit of recovery time here to unscramble his brains. A lavender pillow might help. And he will (I hope) get a chance to know the kind of girl who doesn't believe that showing her cleavage and enticing him into compromising positions is the best way to win his interest.

Author Reply: Hehehe Yeah, I opted for not doing the amnesia route :D Yes, recovery time is exactly what he needs. As interesting as I'm sure he finds cleavage, it doesn't mean the lass is as nice as the view.

Thank you for reading and resoonding so faithfully, Bodkin :) Glad to have you along on this story!

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