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Brothers at Heart  by Radbooks 3 Review(s)
SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 25 on 12/3/2006
I enjoyed this chapter - and as a surgeon, I found it plausible. ;)

If you're ever looking for medical advice for fic again, feel free to e-mail me. I'm always more than happy to help, especially as it usually gives me more good fic to read.

Author Reply: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad that you found it plausible, that was my main goal here and so I'm glad I was successful. Thanks for your offer, I may take you up on that for future stories... I'm sure there will be other wounds! :)

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 25 on 12/3/2006
I'm not a medical person either, but the description of Halbarad's wound and the resulting infection and fever were definitely credible, and quite suspenseful.

Good work on the battle, too.

Author Reply: Hi, Raksha! I'm so glad that you found that it all worked well together. Sometimes when I work on a chapter for a long time - and this one was a very long time - I can lose sense of the suspense and whether or not it is working like I had hoped. I think it's there, but I'm not sure until my betas and others read it. Thanks for reviewing.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 25 on 12/3/2006
Another great chapter Radbooks which, I for one, am glad to read any time that you can get around to posting. Don't worry, I know all about RL getting in the way! Looking forward to the rest of this.

Author Reply: Thank you, harrowcat, I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for your patience!

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