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| Unexpected by Madeleine | 11 Review(s) |
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| SimplegirlfromLP | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 5/16/2020 |
| Thank you for such an amazing story. I love this couple so much and the princes Amrothos and Erchirion are so much fun. I enjoyed the sexy scenes and the medical scenes and could picture the procedures so vividly. Well done. Enjoyed this story immensely. Wish you would continue it. Thank you for posting. | |
| Ana | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/23/2013 |
| A man's true Honour. Maddy would have taken us to a different approach. To stay true to his word till the end?. Maybe a Vow at his Boast ritual, that he would only marry for love, a way of honoring his father and his mother. His honorability, his honesty: His true strength, his inner power. His men would follow him to whatever end. He keeps his word. He falls in love for the first time, a feeling unknown, unhoped for, unexpected. He tries to fight against this feeling. He has made a decision, but now Imrahil is the one who is taking her away from the Houses of Healing. Now he can have her for himself. He can now acknowledge these unsettling feelings. He will tell HER, only her, but not on flat parchment. He will wait for her. Elfhem would know "...you would not be here" he tells her. Great the wisteria touch, the stunning flowers that link the world of men and the divine. At the Houses of Healing,in the dark, later her pale lavender dress. So many hints and details. I still like to re-read from time to time.I always find something unexpected. One of her friends was right. We can't even imagine the stories she still had for us. Ana María | |
| Adamas | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 7/1/2012 |
| Greeting Madeleine, I have just finished reading all your Tolkien stories posted to Stories of Arda. I really enjoyed them. I have been a Tolkien fan for many years and I have always enjoyed reading good stories about some of my favorite Tolkien characters. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work and especially enjoyed your characterization of Lothiriel and Eomer as well as Lothiriel’s brothers and father. I was entertained by the dialog and banter between Lothiriel and Eomer as well as the interacts of Lothiriel and her brothers. I found your characterization of Imrahil brilliant. I was completely disappointed that your story “Unexpected” was not completed and was wondering if you will be posting any additional chapters. I would really love to see how you resolve the story line. I completely appreciate the time and research that you have put into your writing. I will be waiting eagerly to read your future work. | |
| Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 7/20/2011 |
| I just finished this story which I thoroughly enjoyed except for a couplte of parts that I just paged past. I do hope you will finish it someday. I would love to see what happens next, especially to Eofur. | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/29/2008 |
| I think this particular crisis will only serve to strengthn their relationship and I'm very interested to know just what Eomer is planning and how her 2 younger brothers will contribute to it. Eofor may be a wastrel but he's the type that you'd want to know what will happen to him. It's been a year since your last update and I hope real life is treating you well. I'm very very curious as to what happens next and hope that you will still update. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 4/24/2008 | |
| Madeleine, I have greatly enjoyed your series with Eomer and Lothíriel. Please finish the last section "Unexpected". I have laughed, cried and laughed and cried (at the same time). You draw word pictures so well that your readers can actually see them. Your characters are completely three-dimensional and totally "human", "elf", "dwarf" and especially "hobbit". It would be a shame to not finish this grouping. I plan on going on the the next story, even though I wish I know just what you had in mind for the central characters. I can just picture such an argument with Lothiriel saying...."Eomer, I forgot to tell you something." Thank you for an enjoyable read. Dinah | |
| nautika | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/21/2008 |
| I'd love to see an update on "Unexpected". I hope Real Life is treating you well and you are able to write soon. nautika | |
| nautika | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/26/2007 |
| I would have *sworn* I'd reviewed this already. Let me just cut to the chase. Update *now*. Please!! | |
| Lindariel | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/11/2007 |
| Hmm . . . where can I sign up to take Eomer's course in basic Rohirric? I LOVE his teaching methods. A terrific story! Probably the best characterization of Eomer and Lothiriel I have read yet. Thanks so much! When do we get the next chapter? | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 7/10/2007 | |
| I do so enjoy this story of yours. I have just recently gotten introduced to Eomer/Lothiriel fanfic by a friend of mine. My friend got me hooked on this, so since my friend introduced me to Eomer/Lothiriel I have been surfing the net for good stories and your long series about their relationship seems so...so...how should I say it? Unique and polished? ...Professional? Well, overall I have read your stories about Eomer/Lothiriel but just decided to put one single review to cover them all here. Sorry, if you like to have MANY reviews. I am just feeling a bit lazy... These stories of yours are so intriguing and complicated which makes it even better. Lothiriel, is so intelligent and sophisticated on how you portray her and I like that very much instead of a simple-minded yet beautiful queen of Rohan. Another is that she is very strong-willed, so she will fight for what she believes in. Eomer is very lucky and fortunate to have someone like her that is in love with him... Will you PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think that all the fans of your writing can agree with me. Can't we?? Update!!! Update!!! Hooray!!!! | |