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Crickhollow March 1420  by Anso the Hobbit 3 Review(s)
PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2006
Oh, I am so happy to see this here! I was looking for the third chapter last week on LJ and couldn't find it--I was feart that I had some how missed it.

Again, this is a wonderful beginning! I love the fact that Esmeralda and Saradoc still worry over their "baby". Enjoyed the interaction between the cousins, too!

Pippinfan

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2006

Merry is very suspisious of berilic being there, but of course he is right, his parents worried about them, after everything that they've been through.
Berilic is a good cousin, but also curious of what happened...


great job...

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/22/2006
I was pleased to see a new story from you posted. I like your Berilac. I do think he means to help if only Merry will let him. He seems very concerned about his cousin. Glad that Pippin was feeling better by the end of the chapter as I do think that Merry is about to need some help himself. Lovely beginning!

Author Reply: Thank you! The problem is Merry letting people help him, isn't it? :D

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