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First Age of the Sun: Triumph  by Inglor 2 Review(s)
Artelemnar FëanestarReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/3/2017
I loved this!
I felt so sad when I saw it hasn't been updated since 2006... I would've loved to read more of this.
Thank you for writing this, have a nice day :)

NarielReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/25/2007
Thank you so much Inglor for answering my review! I am VERY glad to know that you plan to finish your so far fantastic, wonderful story.

I have known so far about your story since last spring, but I found it on a different site. When I read the five chapters I was entranced so I hope you continue the story and hopefully finish it!

I like the idea that Luthien is so far above Finrod yet loves him all the same. Which is very similar to the tale of the romance and meeting of Thingol and Melian.

Doesn't it occur to you that their offspring would be and will always be the fairest upon Arda till the end with Dagor Dagorath???????????????????????? Inglor, please answer my questions....................

Also since Luthien vowed to stay with Finrod no matter what she hears about the past of the Noldor, how will she react? She is basically trapped in the relationship then if she regrets after hearing what he is going to tell her, but luckily Finrod is a nice old chap...

My other question just out of curiosity is, Which of Finch's stories is your favorite? Mine has to be "Saying Farewell." Especially the ending with "Almost. One of the saddest words of Arda Marred." What is your favorite quote out of all her Finrod stories though? Sorry. I apologize about all this. It is just that I don't have that many people to talk to about Finch's stories, plus you like them too. I don't blame you, I REALLY miss Finch too...

Okay I realize my review is getting a bit off topic but who cares? I also really like your story "Oath Renewed" on FF.net about Narsil or now more properly called Anduril. In the story, when I read it I could practically feel the sorrow and regret that Finrod had for leaving Amarie. Could you just for fun think about writing your own version of their parting? I know some people already have their version, but hey everyone's has something unique about theirs that marks theirs from the others. (Does that make sense?) (Please tell me in your response, if not I will explain it better because I realize it may not make sense.)

Namarie...

P.S. Inglor, I really DO hope to see this story FINISHED. *_* Heh...heh...


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