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From the Shadows  by jenolas 7 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/17/2007
A broken warrior, perhaps, but still a skilled and loving Man.

Author Reply: That he is! *sigh*

jenolas

ireneReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/21/2006
I've read some chapters of this story at ffnet and left a review, if I remember correctly, for Chapter 2 whose description of nature eventually leading to a storm I thought was astoundingly well written.
Well, I`m glad to read this story here again and more of it. I have only one objection, though. I guess you got the idea from the movies. Whatever Aragorn's reasons were to live the merry life of a ranger and adventurer for decades, I don't think it was insecurity or dread. He was just waiting for the right moment.In my opinion, Aragorn is a very clever guy who uses opportunities -- and persons -- at best.
OK, this story isn't about Aragorn but about brotherly love and I enjoy it. Thanks!

Irene

Author Reply: I am pleased you like this very Au fic (perceived faults notwithstanding) that is loosely based on the movie I suppose.

I guess I should that to me, canon does not apply to such a fic and that the views expressed about Aragorn's motives were intended to be those of Boromir.

DotReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/22/2006
I do love the way you write the teasing nature of the relationship between the brothers! Even now there’s such innate ease between them. You made me smile when Faramir hugs Haldir in gratitude. And Haldir’s pride at serving his Lady is really touching. I feel sorry for him because it seems he really will mourn her when she sails.

Mmm… you’re probably nice and warm where you are but a hot spring sounds lovely to me about now! (Yes, even without the two lads!) It was a very moving moment when they each see the scars the other one bears, made all the more so by Boromir’s recognition that the physical wounds are not the worst ones that his little brother has.

I think I grinned the whole time they indulged in horseplay. They certainly enjoyed it and seem to have acquired some energy from the pure happiness of being in each other’s company, but I wouldn’t be surprised if they suffer for the exertion later. LOL at Boromir reprimanding his brother for speaking so lightly of Arwen! I think he would be glad, though, to know that Aragorn and his wife have such a good relationship with Faramir and clearly respect him and think of him as a friend.

I’m not surprised the conversation about Rivendell and Gondor went on all afternoon! I really felt for Boromir, though, when he asked to know about his beloved city. “I will not be returning to Minas Tirith, Faramir” Ah. I suspected he might say something like that. But crikey, you nearly broke my heart when he talked about honour and how he should not be trusted and there’s no place for him in Minas Tirith! I think it’s brave of him to sacrifice this for honour and to do the best for his people, but it’s heartbreaking to think that he sees himself as less of a person now. And then! Then! “My days may yet be numbered.” Ack. So maybe it is just a temporary thing, that some power conspired to give the brothers this last chance together, but that’s all it really is. Who knows? Besides you, obviously ;-) I really can’t wait to see what you have up your sleeve for this, jenolas!



Author Reply: Hey Dot,

Sorry for the long time in my answering as well, but so it goes.

I am glad you are liking this, and while I am stil not entirely comfortable with the AU aspect,I am finding it surprisingly intriguing and challenging. As well a chance to let Haldir shine a little can't be a bad thing, in my opinion.

To my mind, Boromir is a man of great pride and honour there would have been many unresolved issues that I suspect would have plagued him had he survived. Luckily he has Faramir ( and Haldir to some extent) to help him deal with them, but perhaps the final outcome will not be as expected.

DotReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/20/2006
Just stopping by to let you know how much I'm enjoying this - I'll be back with proper reviews for the last two chapters, hopefully in the next few days. Great story, jenolas :-)

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/19/2006
Poor Boromir. I wonder if he was saved because he needs to come to terms with what happened before the orc attack. Faramir has a purpose in this new world order - but Boromir cannot do the one thing on which he prided himself most. Yet he and Faramir need the comfort and support each affords the other.

Author Reply: Boromir has a lot to deal with as you say, but the path ahead is certainly easier when they have each other to turn to for support.

ElenyReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/19/2006
You portray the psychology of the two brothers very well. As for Boromir, he surely must feel broken in two having lost the ability to use his military skills, to be the fighter and protector of his beloved city and people. This is somehow the crisis many of us meet in a certain way. Fight it or stand it, both may seem far too complicated.

Author Reply: Yes, this is a very difficult time for Boromir... and a hard choice he feels he needs to make, especially considering how much Faramir needs him at the moment.

mirthorReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/18/2006
As far Galadriel helping to save Boromir - after she purposely sent him out to his death, I should hope so!

Nice to see the brothers time together here. Is there something special abotu the spring? Neither seemed to be suffering from any of their wounds while playing in the water - perhaps it's a source of healing.

Author Reply: As I mentioned in the story, they only 'played' for a few minutes before it became too much for them. Thanks for reading and enjoying.

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