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The Redemption of Meriadoc   by Aelfgifu 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/6/2006
I read this last week, but the connection wouldn't support me leaving a review.

Nice to see this Merry getting his due, but hate to see him broken to his true self in such a manner. And I agree, Frodo's response is interesting.

And am glad to see finally a meeting long overdue as Strider finally meets Pippin and Sam, and reveals where poor Fredegar has gotten off to. Still want to learn HOW he ended up there outside Rivendell.

pebbles66Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/27/2005
I read the entire non-slash version of Ring Around the Merry yesterday. It took me just about all day. I guess I'm sort of cruel, but I was really glad to see Merry get a taste of his own medicine. I just hope that the change in him is one that will make him back into the old Merry. And I hope that poor Frodo can return to his old self, too. I'm a little worried about Sam with the ring, though. Thanks for updating so quickly. Will this story be as long as RATM?
Oh, also, I am enjoying the quotes from the book and movie that you are throwing in. I find myself wanting to watch the movies and read all the books again to find where the quotes come from!

Author Reply: So glad we were able to entertain you for the entire day! I hope you have time to look at the illustrations on the official web page (see author notes). Thanks for letting us know what you think too. It means the world! hugs!
emma

ArielReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/27/2005
In spite of the graphic nature of this chapter, it is gratifying to see Merry getting his comeupance. Thanks for posting this story here too.

Couple of notes - there's a large section in the middle that looks like it's in italics and shouldn't be. You might want to check it.

Also, I'd consider editing the prelude. My guess is folks who are reading the story here aren't likely to be interested in the slash version. You also might want to check with Nilmandra how she feels about you linking to it from here. Perhaps cut it to a simple link to your main site? Just suggesting.

Hmmm... yes. Angst for breakfast. Yum!


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