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A New Song  by Eruanneth_Luin 6 Review(s)
EdlynReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2008
I stumbled across this as I was perusing Maglor-fics and wish that I had found it much, much sooner. It's so beautifully written and... well, I haven't been able to come up with words that truly describe how it made me feel.

I have added this to my favourites and will definitely revisit it again and again.

Edlyn

Katharine MooresReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/19/2007
How very beautiful. Your weaving of European legend sanctified by Christian belief is elegant; Professor Tolkein would surely have approved.
Thank you for this sparkling story.

Author Reply: If as Tolkien mentioned, there are still elves present, they would certainly have been drawn to such an astonishing event. This was my premise for the tale. When we can step back and 'see' through other eyes it can make a well-known story refract the light in a completely unexpected manner.

Thank you for your review, Katherine. It is good to know that others appreciate your efforts.

elliskaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/19/2005
Very cool portrayal of how Tolkien's world and the real world might come together and of all the people to witness such an event, I loved that it was those two. I particularly loved the use of song--something I loved in Tolkien. Well done!

Author Reply: Thank you for your review, elliska. It is a delight to ‘see’ events occurring through the eyes of strangers, especially those who have no need of evidence that Ilúvatar exists.

It is written that there shall be a “new song” sung before the throne, so perhaps Tolkien glimpsed a tiny portion of the “old song”. Perhaps what some people refer to as “the big bang” was merely Ilúvatar presenting their “music-in-reality” to the Ainur.

Daeron and Maglor are two of my favorite elves, both minstrels of the first water, both wandering alone through long ages, grieving their individual losses.

I am glad you enjoyed the tale and apologize for the long delay in replying to your review.

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/19/2005
This is marvelous.Beautifully written, lovely language. And the imagery of two ancient enemies joining the angel's song of Joy will long stay with me.Thank you!

Author Reply: Thank you for the review, demeter d, and forgive the delay in responding.

While not exactly enemies, these two gifted elves had little in common. Daeron was not at Menegroth when the oath-driven Fëanorionath (Sons of Fëanor and their followers) attempted to regain the Silmaril so likely heard of the attack much later and hearing of a thing is not the same as witnessing the occurrence.

But they were from two different elven cultures, though each burdened with a grief beyond measure. Therefore they would not have each sought the other. The drawing of the Song brought together with common yearning these two lonely beings.

Forgiveness comes in many forms. And you are welcome.

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/17/2005
How lovely to think that perhaps Maglor and Daeron, the two great minstrels, were witness to this new song and sang of it themselves. It could well be, given they still walked these shores as the ages passed! I like how they were drawn to the song of Iluvatar come among us. Lovely.

Author Reply: That the two finest minstrels among the Elves were, for different reasons, still ‘here’ seems quite appropriate considering this unprecedented occasion. The incredible attraction to the Song of Ilúvatar would naturally be inducement to undergo even great trials to discover the source. Thank you for your review, Nilmandra, and may your Christmas be filled with joy and love.

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/17/2005
I like this. I like the solemnity and majesty, and the way your watcher senses the Music. It reminds me of one of my favourite carols, 'It Came Upon A Midnight Clear'.

Nicely done.


Jay

Author Reply: Thank you for your review, Jay. Yes, the Music from which The One created all would play a very special role in this wondrous event. And, of course, that the Firstborn would be attracted by it is no wonder at all.

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