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A Liminal Patience  by Thevina 1 Review(s)
ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/16/2005
Wonderful writing. The imagery is so solid, so detailed, striking, poetic and poignant, sensuous without being at all improper, and beautifully restrained...well, I almost feel sorry for Grima!

This is perfection. Keep it up!

Author Reply: Thank you so much! I'd hoped to express his longing evocatively, but also have a bit of a creepy edge of foreshadowing… Many thanks for reading and sharing your comments.

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