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The Last Yule in Halabor  by Soledad 2 Review(s)
DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 18 on 12/27/2005
Oh my! I rather had a hunch, when Peredur asked about the Sea, that he was going to ask Odhrain to make a journey, but it was a surprise to me as well, that he asked him to escort the children. Remembering his characterization from the previous chapter, I wonder how this will affect his outlook on life--that his life is saved by doing a favor for the brother he was never allowed to know.

Author Reply: I'm planning to write about their time in Dol Amroth, one day. But I've got too many unfinished stories at the moment, I need to work on those first.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 18 on 12/17/2005
Well - it would seem that Peredur chose an excellent moment to reconcile with his half-brother and send him and his children to Dol Amroth. And that Odhrain has probably acquired himself a family to look after.

Peredur's mother sounds an unpleasant old lady - and his brother and sister as if they spent too much time listening to her. Especially the sister. Who is safely off to Belfalas, terrorising her own family.

How did Peredur escape and develop into a pleasant person, I wonder? Probably thanks to Iorwen.

Author Reply: Peredur was a surprise for myself, honestly. I originally planned to kill off Odhrain, but these characters have a life of their own.

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