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| Your Heart Will Be True by Write Sisters | 4 Review(s) |
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| Sio | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2006 |
| WOW, finally, the long awaited story has come! AND what a beginning. Full of mysterious movements by enemy forces (wonderfully evil ones at that) who arent even in full agreement with one another. It will be interesting to watch Halda and see what he does on his own as well as under orders. Nice little drop there about Thorongil - that bodes ill. :D And 'ill' we love!! Eldarion was charming and funny. Your descriptions are crystal clear as always, lending a totally three dimensional effect to your stories that drops the reader smack into the middle of the story and wont let them out again. Amazing how reading the first chapter is like walking through the 'wardrobe' only to find yourself coming back out at the 'tbc' and wondering how long you've been gone! Cant wait to read more! Siobhan Author Reply: Sio!! *hugs* Wow, we're so glad you came -- and even more glad that you're liking it! Highest praise, and all that. *grins* Halda was a bit of a Duurben -- he started out as just another guy to be there and talk to Mavranor and then he sort of expanded of his own volition. To be honest, we were just as interested as you are to see what he'd do... *laughs* Yes, 'ill' we love, and we shall prove it in the pages to come! *blushes abound at complimetnt on descriptions* Thank you so much! We shall now float around for the rest of the day... *goofy smiles* | |
| RS | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/6/2006 |
| EEEWWWW!! The Queen Mavroner is PURE EEEVVIILLLL. I was getting nervous just reading her plans to take over Gondor. The dagger that was in display is so profound to me. I wonder what's brewing in Halda's mind. Are his plans going to somehow foil the evil queen's plans?? He has been planning something for years and he sounds as sly as the ol' queen, if not more. I like the end of the chapter.. Brought a smile to my face! One could imagine poor Durbeen's face!! Such a contrast from the beginning of the chapter. I can tell this story is going to be a nail biter! Can't wait. Author Reply: *grins* Why, yes she is! She would be flattered (and we are flattered) that you noticed! Glad you liked the dagger too; as for Halda: he's a crafty one alright, but his plans are known to no one but himself at this point. *innocent smile* And we shall do our best to live up to nail-biter status. *winks* | |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2006 |
| This story sounds wonderful so far. I love how you have set the scene of peace in Gondor when we know what is about to occur. Can't help wondering though if the queen has taken into account the help that will be given by the elves, especially Legolas. I have now decided to look up your other stories and watch the trailer! Author Reply: Thank you, Kitty! Overlooking Legolas has certainly been a mistake many villains have made in the past. But is Mavranor as superior to those villains as she seems to think...? *angelic smile* We are very flattered at your interest in our other stories! Please, by all means, help yourself! A lot of these characters will make more sense if you do. *smiles* | |
| Vilwarin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2006 |
| Ah, how wonderful to finally read the story! I have been waiting for it for ages *lol*. Very well written, I can feel the tension still lingering in the air! A ruthless queen out for vengeance , killing all that stand in her way. ou showed well the fear the others have. What could be the other plan? I am looking so forward to find out. Uh, I really thought Duurben was being attacked. The attacker came to me as a great surprise and te lovely scene made the knowledge of what is going to happen to Gondor all the more horribe. I am so happy to finally read high quality fanfiction again already love the story. Update soon, please ~Vil Author Reply: How equally wonderful to see you! We're glad you're enjoying it so far -- the beginning, rather like the ending, was re-written a fair bit. As for the other plan... *studiously innocent look* We hope to update every other day, but crave your indulgence if we we occasionally miss a day. *grin* | |