| To Ride, To Will, To Fear by adrinkcalled | 2 Review(s) |
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| phyloxena | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/21/2007 |
| I liked the story. I'm not much for h/c, but you kept good convinsing pace to your narration, with no pause to think about medical possibility. Aragorn's not very concentrated reflections as he rides came off most credible. I wish we knew more about villains. |
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| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/3/2006 |
A pleasure to read your new version of this lovely story.I think you missed out a bit I liked about both Aragorn and Eomer seeing Faramir in a new light but I loved the extended healing scene and the story flows more smoothly.
Author Reply: Thanks! A better flowing story was what I was aiming for, so this is good news. Yes, I did leave out the bit you refer to - I couldn't decide where to place it and not make it sound forced, so in the end I left it out. But I think the small shifts in their relationships can be derived from bits and pieces throughout the story. |
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