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| Waiting by Estelle | 3 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/14/2005 |
| Indeed, a moment of great grief for the father, and the one word which can release the floods. Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing :) Yes, word can be a powerful thing :) | |
| Brazgirl | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/12/2005 |
| Very touching. I like. Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing :D I'm glad you like it! | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/12/2005 |
| *claps* Woot! You did it, and quite a touching double drabble it is, too! Very nice. :-) Suggestion, though, if you do not mind... I think the whole thing would be a touch better in present tense. Author Reply: Thank you :) Yeah, I have initially written it in present tense but it looked kinda weird so I changed it to past tense. Then I changed back to present and but finally settled on past. LOL!! Perhaps I should change it back to present tense. Hahaha! Will let you beta the other version :) | |