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Bilbo's Illusion  by GIRLOFRING 3 Review(s)
AntaneReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/30/2009
An intriguing, though rather frightening story. I look forward to more with the hope Frodo and Bilbo will recover. *looks at Frodo fearfully, wishing I could hug him*

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/29/2009
I see that the font demon has gotten to you, too, cutting your italicized material apart and displacing it. Did that to me, too. Since I started saving my writing in .rtf format and posting from that I've not been troubled with this problem, but it drove me crazy for a while!\

Poor Frodo--he is experiencing the worst; and is his presence somehow stopping them from crossing onto the Straight Road to the Undying Lands?

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/29/2009
I'm glad this isn't the end, Teresa! I look forward to chapter 3.

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