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The Green Knight and the Heir of Meduseld  by Le Rouret 4 Review(s)
trinkiReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/23/2006
oh MAN!!! How horrible! but it fits in the story, in the world, but MAN!! You really know how to pull on the heart-strings. On the one hand, I know that the worse it gets (in a plot) the better the resolution will be. But on the other hand, it's hard to go through some of that. And it's not even REAL, (sorry folks). All that to say, you're doing a Great Job, and I can't wait for the rest. (no reply needed, keep writing the story!)

wantanelfReviewed Chapter: 17 on 4/21/2006
Another amazing chapter!! I don't know if I can stand the suspense. What has happened to The Green Knight? Poor Piukka. I can only imagine why he literally ran himself to death and the reason can't be good. Please don't make us wait too long. You do such an amazing job of weaving your tales and characters together. Your stories are always a pleasure to read. Thanks again.

LynReviewed Chapter: 17 on 4/20/2006
Your ability to write a rousing good story is unequaled! I'm enjoying this
immensely. I am puzzled by all the "mine uncle" or "mine anything" because
"mine" is "the absolute form of "my", used without a following noun" (per my
dictionary. I have not studied Middle or Old English, so I'm unsure of previous usage.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 17 on 4/20/2006
Oh my. This is not good. This is not good at all. I should have suspected that a tale of Fastred beginning to make friends and behave in a manner befitting his rank was just too good to be true and would lead to a nasty sting in the tail. Poor Piukka. Poor Bandy. And Meivel is going to be going wild.

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