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Be or Become  by Vana Tuivana 3 Review(s)
NarielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/9/2007
This is very sad, but shows how great a writer you are if you cause a reader to start feeling what Finrod and Amarie might have felt, especially at such a vulnerable moment for Finrod when he was not occupied by anything of high importance... I do hope that you really do write a story (hopefully a long one) about Finrod. He is my fav character and just with this I do think you will be a PERFECT author to write him!

I see that you have not updated recently so I pray and desire that this review of mine will wake your Silmarillion & Tolkien Muse again!

MartaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/23/2006
There's something beautiful about how you told this moment: bittersweet, but humorous, with the two intermingling quite nicely. Well done.

EllieReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/14/2005
This beautiful and so sad. Well done.

Author Reply: Thank you, Ellie! I'm glad you liked it. I do like Finrod and, hopefully, will someday be able to write him as well as he deserves. :)

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