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In Shadow Realm  by Legolass 7 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/13/2005

It was nice to see the hobbits though pippin was being picked on...It seems Legolas watches Aragorn and noticed he looked bad.
I love the friendship they have, it seems Legolas worries his friend works to hard.
I wonder who the twice forgotten are and do they want revenge for something, and is the uneasiness that Aragorn feels connected to this...

Love this Please update soon...

Author Reply:

Oops - sorry about Pippin. :-) He's just an easy target for others to pick on - even in the books - but you know they love him all the same.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/9/2005
How in Middle Earth did I miss your first chapter? Oh well, it gave me all the more joy to read two chapters at once. I agree that I love cuddly hobbits, fellowship, friendship and bittersweet memories. And I too hear spooky music creeping up in the dark! Can't wait!

Author Reply:
Nice mix isn't it? Cuddly characters and ominous music? :-)

Thank you for dropping in.

Alison HReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/9/2005
Yes, a new chapter! I do love your stories and I can't wait for more of this one.Can I hear ominous music in the background? Something dark is going to encroach upon our reunited friends and I can't wait to find out what, or who, it is!

I hadn't read LOTR before the movies came out but I quickly became aware that the members of the Fellowship truly loved each other.I found the books very emotional and your stories, especially 'For The Love Of The Lord Of The White Tree' are just as satisfying.As another reviewer stated, Legolas' words to Aragorn left me in a puddle of mush, too.I do love those two and you manage to write just the perfect words to highlight the deep love they have for each other *sigh*.

Update soon.

Take care.

Ali.


Author Reply:
Glad you read the books as well, Ali - that's where the movies and our stories get their inspiration. TOlkien was a great writer.

Thank you for you review - nice to know you 'mushed' too. :-)

TithenFeredirReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/9/2005
The elf sighed and cast his eyes downward to the green grass around their feet. “What I meant, Estel, was that… some day… some day…the Lands would be a better place to go to,” he said quietly. “But till that day… my own place is here with you.” Lifting his head to face the man squarely, he finished: “And till that day, Estel – there is no better place to be.”

Warm fuzzies on that bit. I liked the warmth in the Fellowship's reunion as well. It would be bittersweet. Looking forward to finding out what exactly is causing Aragorn's unease. ~TF


Author Reply:
The unease will build slowly, TF, at least in the beginning, even if warmth was the theme of this chapter.

Thank you so bunch for always being here.

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/9/2005
Ok quick hello today, I'm supposed to be paying attention to a power point presentation in what has to be the absolute most boringest(is that a word?) meeting in all of Arda. Great chapter as always. You would think by now Estel and Legolass would start to pay attention to those funny feelings when they get them. It was great seeing everyone together, even the twins (my personal favorites) Such love comes shining through in your words, why do I have my own sneaky feeling that this is just the provebial quiet before the storm...Oops gotta go, I think I'm supposed to answer a question.

Wishing for a balrog to swallow me now,

Your fan

Eliza

Author Reply:
Oh Eliza - what an amusing vision you provided me with!! I hope you didn't get into trouble. :-D I wish I could have conjured up a balrog for you!

You like the twins? I think there will be more of them before the story is through...

Thanks for dropping in - ALWAYS good to hear from you.






nessaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/9/2005
I was just thinking about your story and here comes the next chapter. I guess I will have to think of it more often if that helps updates come quicker! I loved all the tenderness shown between characters in this chapter. They all love each other very much. Is Aragorn being haunted by evil creatures? Something is lurking in his mind. We will have to enjoy the peace of this chapter as I'm sure pretty soon there will be very little peace to be had. Is that right?

Author Reply:
"We will have to enjoy the peace of this chapter as I'm sure pretty soon there will be very little peace to be had. Is that right?"

Now, WHY would you think that, Nessa? :-D Lol!

Yes, there is much love among them all - especially the members of the Fellowship - and (in my stories) especially Aragorn and Legolas. :-)

Thanks for your response.

SmilingDragonGirlReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/9/2005
*plunges headlong into story with a big splash* How can anyone expect me to cook a meal when I just found an update from you in my inbox? Really, isn't it perfectly understandable that something like that is much more important than *eating*? ;-)

LOL! I just found the answer in your story: I'm obviously surrounded by hobbits! :D

"radiant as the sun and light as the late spring breeze" - that's beautiful... *sigh*

"It was a heartwarming scene, this reunion of several races from different parts of Middle-earth: a blend of various colors on a single canvas, complementing each other to paint a picture of peace... " I love this sentence!

And I love how you describe the subtle interaction between Aragorn and Legolas... and all the references to "For the Love of the Lord of the White Tree".

“And till that day, Estel – there is no better place to be.” *sighs and melts into happily smiling puddle on the floor*

Do I have to say that I loved this chapter?! ;-) I will wait patiently for the next update...

Almut

P.S. The summary does not remind me of Ovid any longer. ;-)



Author Reply:
Hey! I always love reviews from you! So... did you get to eat after all that? After you solidified back from your puddle state, that is!

I thought you might like this chapter - we both love those two, don't we? I'm glad you'll wait patiently for the next chapter, because I think you will have to. :-)

Thanks so much for reviewing.

p.s. So you prefer this summary?




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