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Small Tales  by White Wolf 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/27/2005
Yes, I can see this. Very well done extrapolation from that marvelous movie moment.

Author Reply: Thank you. I'm glad you like what I've done and how I did it. I hope you'll like the next one equally well.

elizaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/27/2005
Hi White wolf,

Its so nice to see an update to your tales. I like this last drabble the best!( but I've said that about each one you posted. LOL) I always wondered how Legolas felt after the wall exploded, especially since so many elves died at Helms deep. Writing it from Aragorns POV is a nice touch, glad to see him in tune with his friends despair. Now since it's connected to the next drabble, I won't feel guilty for bugging you about a quick Post.

Your fan,

Eliza

Author Reply: I'm glad that you like each story better than the last one. It shows that I'm getting better as a writer and plot-builder. I've often wondered how PJ would have played Legolas's feelings, if he'd had the time to explore them. I'm glad that, at least, he didn't have Aragorn blaming Legolas. I think that would have devastated our elf. I'll get the next drabble up after I update Dragonfire.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/27/2005
The Firstborn carry those emotions and memories far into a future we mortals can hardly imagine.

That's quite a price to pay for such a long life. This is a marvelous "internal" gap-filler.

Author Reply: I agree that immortality has a price for the elves. I'm glad you like the internal nature of the story. I rarely write first person stories, but this one and the next just 'demanded' it.

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