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The Bee Charmer  by Pipkin Sweetgrass 3 Review(s)
Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 20 on 10/4/2006
*sigh*

Love!

The songs are wonderful - did you write them?

Beautiful and wonderful!!!

Author Reply: Oh, Bless you, Pearl! Yes, I take the blame for the poems. I hope they served well. You know, romance is something I found difficult to write. I wanted it to sound like it really feels when one falls and falls hard, but I didn't want it to be saccharin and schmoopy. Not that shmoopy is bad, you know, but anyway... Thank you so much for your review! I've been just swamped lately so getting to update and get reviews has been a real blessing! From you especially, since I know how busy you've been.

major hugses,

Pipkin

KittyReviewed Chapter: 20 on 10/4/2006
Hm, it seems Bob Ferny has at least some brain left. But I still hope he will not do anything stupid.

Very romantic chapter. Boromir and Saro are so sweet together *sighs contentedly* And Pippin's song was so fitting for the couple in love with each other!

Oh, and I was sorry to learn about your computer problems in your last reply. Believe me, I know how frustrating that is. No wonder you need your time! Don't worry, I'll not give up on this story, I'm *much* too curious how it will continue.

Author Reply: Thank you so very much! I'[ve always wanted to play up Pippin's musicianship. Blame Billy Boyd! Still having computer probs, but I'll muddle through until I can get something better.

What I've learned from writing this is that romance is a lot harder to write than I had thought!

The next chapter should be up fairly soon. Thanks so much for reviewing! I cannot stress enough how important it is to review, and it means a lot to me that you took the time. The next chapter should be up shortly.

hugs,
Pipkin

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 20 on 10/3/2006
Bob has lost his honor and his sister, but might just find his honor back if he'll take the chance.

Sweet laughter.

Author Reply: Indeed! If there is one thing I know, it is that while there is life, there is hope, and change, even remarkable change, is possible if one has the capacity to be fearlessly honest with oneself. Thank you so much for reviewing! It does mean so much. The next installment should soon be ready.

hugs,
Pipkin

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