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The Bee Charmer  by Pipkin Sweetgrass 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 19 on 10/3/2006
The Dunedain do tend to give their hearts completely. I only rejoice this has happened a second time for Boromir, and am certain Ruby rejoices in her husband's completion.

Author Reply: Yes, she would, as anyone who truly loves someone would want them to be happy. And yes, they do give themselves completely. This is greatly the reason Boromir could learn to make of himself a new man. Once the heart is set on something, it is as though set in stone. Thank you so much for the review, I can never say it enough: show a writer what they are doing right and it makes a better writer of them. When I get a review, it makes me want to give the reader something worth the reading and reviewing.

hugs,

Pipkin

KittyReviewed Chapter: 19 on 7/29/2006
Only some days ago I had wondered if you would update this - and here it is :)

That was a sweet chapter, Pipkin! Saro was so happy about her new dress - for her it must've been a very special occasion.

“You see, my friend here,” he gestured at Boromir, “has none of the fairer sex to help him make his home a proper abode, Do I detect a hint here? *grin* You know, Boromir is so sweet with children, it is about time he gets some of his own. Well, he is a kind heart, anyway, and it was very nice of him to dance with the poulterer's daughter.

The end was so wonderful, with Boromir teaching Saro the Harad dance and them kissing in the end. And Saro thought about gossip if she'd dance with Merry and Pippin? *Now* I can hear the gossip! *lol*
But I am a bit worried about the one who was following them.

Update soon, please? In the meantime I have to re-read the story to refreshen my memory about earlier chapters.

Author Reply: Thank you so very much for your kind words. I do apologise for not updating sooner. My beta reader is very busy, plus I had two computers die on me, and now my writing computer has a fatal hard disk failure, so it has been slow. Please accept my apologies, and please don't give up on me! I'm hard at work on the next chapter.

Again, thank you so very much!

hugs,

Pipkin

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 19 on 7/28/2006
This was as bewitching as their dance :) I love the comfortable banter between the three good friends. Beautiful, Wonderful, Delightful!

Author Reply: Thank you so very much! I wasn't sure I could write romance and I found it much harder even than I feared. I was so happy to see your review, because coming from my special friend, it is so very special to me.

hugs,
Pipkin

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