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| Mysterious Relations by Merry_the_Hobbit | 13 Review(s) |
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| Pip | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/14/2006 |
| I like your sroty so far, please update soon, it would be neat to see what happens. | |
| yelena | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/17/2005 |
| OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....................AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No, really, it's brilliant. Hurry with chapter four. Please. | |
| hannibul | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/21/2005 |
| Hey V!!!!!!!!!!!! I miss u...but that's beside the point. Nice story, so far. I hope you can continue working on it, what with school starting and all. I can't exactly imagine Frodo using the phrase "what's up", but that's just me. are you and kel still working on a story together? that'd turn out really cool, i bet See ya | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/14/2005 |
| So, his name is Haldamor. He *is* a ranger, isn't he? But what on Middle Earth is the grey-haired hobbit up to? I've really no idea. This story is very mysterious. I stick to it :) | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/13/2005 |
| You have a very exciting beginning to this story! | |
| good_one_pip | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/24/2005 |
| So far, so good Queen V! Cookbooks! A perfect spare reading material for hobbits. However, you have me worried about Pip and Sam! Don't put Pippin through to much pain, at least for my sake. I could barely read "The Palantir" yesterday, and I don't need anymore trama yet:) | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/24/2005 |
| And the suspense in growing... Merry obviously doesn't see any danger, otherwise he would never have left Pippin's side. A cookbook is very appropriate and a reasonable excuse for both cousins, not to realize that their friends have not returned yet. What will happen next? | |
| yelena | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/23/2005 |
| Wow! I can't wait to see what happens to poor sam & pippin! | |
| yelena | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/23/2005 |
| Oh, V!!!! I like it! Can't wait to see what you come up with next. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/23/2005 |
| How perfect--a Hobbit cookbook? A couple things--Hobbits don't have attics, particularly in one story houses and single-floor tunnel smials. Second, you had them arriving in the rain, but now the sun is shining through the high windows. Perhaps a bit of transition? | |