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Nothing of Note  by Primsong 2 Review(s)
Kara's AuntyReviewed Chapter: 21 on 10/30/2008
Hello Primsong,

It is a testament to your talent that you can write several chapters with only one character but keep the story interesting. I really enjoyed reading about Bilbo's adventures in the Elven Towers, discovering their secrets and 'meetng' the harpist whose instrument dwells in the mathom house.

The Todefoots are as miserly as ever, but Bilbo is too clever for them by half! I laughed at his small revenge on them and would love to have seen their reaction when they woke up later that morning to discover they had been outsmarted by their victim.

On to the next 7 chapters.

Maureen :)

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 21 on 7/11/2005
How lovely for Bilbo to find congenial kin out there in the middle of nowhere!
I really think I like your Ponto very much; and the way he dotes on young Angelica might explain her vanity a few years later, LOL!

Well, I guess I must leave off for the night--it's getting to be my bedtime, and I have to work tomorrow.

Unless I wake up and can't sleep...

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