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Dragonfire  by White Wolf 123 Review(s)
DelraukoReviewed Chapter: 25 on 2/19/2007
Hello!!! Sorry I haven't reviewed this yet, I read it ages ago but I never could find the time- other things kept nagging for my attention.
This story was fantastic and also thanks so much for all the advice! It has really helped!

Author Reply: Well, I understand busy. Better late than never.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the story. I'm also glad the advice helped you.

NayruReviewed Chapter: 25 on 9/28/2006
Greetings whitewolf!

Ienjoyed the ening to this marvelous story. Somehow I could hear and see the trees words.

Author Reply: Greetings, Nayru.

Thank you very much. If you were able to picutre what I wrote, then I did my job. I'm glad you liked the story.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 25 on 8/17/2006
Ah, indeed healing has come, and all is as it should be once more.

Am so glad to be back online and able to read once more. And thank you for a marvelous tale.

Author Reply: It was a hard road for both of our guys, but you are right, all is as it should be - for the moment anyway. :o)

It's good to have you back. Thank you very much. You are most welcome.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 24 on 8/17/2006
A most difficult situation, trying to break free from such a fascination.

Love will out in the end, however, I'm certain.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/23/2006
It is always a pleasure to review your story White Wolf. What a wisw Oak and a lovely, gentle, ending to this.

Author Reply: Thank you so much. I love hearing from you.

What better way to help a wood-elf begin to recover than a wise tree. Glad you liked the ending and the story. I hope to see you for the next adventure.

Baggins BabeReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/21/2006
What a great story - I'm so relieved to see that Legolas was healed with help from the trees and the stars, and his good friend Aragorn. Love the way you have depicted their friendship.

I really liked Treco as a character and I hope you'll do another story sometime featuring our favourite dragon. He's quite a character and I've always had a sneaking admiration for dragons.



Author Reply: Thank you so much. Aragorn knew he couldn't really help heal Legolas by himself, so he got the elf to turn to the things that had been a part of him his whole life. Glad it worked. Thanks, I love their friendhip and have portrayed that in most of my stories.

I love Treco (and dragons in general), too. I certainly hope to write another story with him in it. I just don't know yet when I can get to it.

Thanks for the review.


Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/21/2006
Thank you for a most enjoyable story. Legolas is lucky to have all of nature to help as well as Aragorn !

Author Reply: You are most welcome. It was my pleasure. Legolas was indeed lucky to have both Nature and such a good friend to help him.

Thanks for reviewing.

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/20/2006
so another story done. It was interesting, though Treco had a smaller part in it than I originally had thought. Doesn't bother me though.

Author Reply: Yes, done, finished, and over. Interesting is good. Treco's part was mainly to be the catalyst to get the adventure going and the one to end Allaura's "reign of terror". I'm glad you weren't too disapponted that his role wasn't bigger. I hope you liked Legolas's recovery.

Thanks for reviewing.

Lady SarumanReviewed Chapter: 24 on 7/13/2006
*frown* That's just like you, isn't it, to either end chapters in cliffys or heart-breaking scenes. And well....as for why I didn't go on here for so long....my excuse is on the review of your other story "He Just Doesn't Listen".

I have several pieces of advice to give to several people:

Advice #1: Aragorn, bring Legolas with you and GO TO RIVENDELL as fast as your feet can carry you! Seeing Legolas like that, with the stone's power burned into his soul is heart-breaking. Maybe then, at Rivendell, all the most powerful elves (e.g. Galadriel and Celeborn) should help Elrond with the healing (unless they've already left for Valinor. Well, actually, I've forgotten when this story takes place. Sorry! I can't help it! Waaaahhhhhhh!!!

Advice #2: Treco, how do you plan on keeping the necklace for its beauty if you haven't even gotten it out of you yet? And when you have, maybe it isn't wise to keep it. Though you may be neither elven nor mortal, it still isn't a good thing. Who knows what'll happen with a dragon? And keep up with your soft-heartedness. It's good to be less stubborn. Which reminds me of stubborn, that leads me to the third piece of advice.

Advice #3: Legolas, don't be so stubborn! Aragorn loves you, and if you keep being so stubborn and refusing his help, that's just bad! Well, except when you get stubborn and refuse to die, that is; that part is good. But don't be stubborn anytime else!

Advice #4: To Ricard: find somebody to take care of Ravenlore for a while and go with Aragorn and Legolas to Rivendell. Oh yeah, and bring your four guards with you too. Being controlled by Allaura for that long isn't good. And one more thing. Don't bury that statue. Knock it down and let it crack. Seriously.

Okay, I think that's all the advice I can give. I'm gonna read your newest story. I'm off now! Namarie!

-Lady Saruman =)

P.S. Since it took you so long, I'm not gonna give you your full share of Hershy's. But then again, since I delayed so badly, I will give you your full share of Hershey's. I'll forgive you if you forgive me. But from now on don't take that long anymore! Please!



Author Reply: We seem to be trading being late. Ah well, RL can be a bugger.
I like your organized pieces of advice. It's all nice and neat.

1. I already did that in "The Wrong Path”, so I wanted to do something different this time. I'm going to have Aragorn try something new. So there will be no Elrond or Galadriel or anyone else like that. You'll see.

2. Good luck on trying to separate a dragon from any of his jewels. He's not the least worried about the necklace, and I'm sure he's right. I think Treco will try to hide his soft-heartedness, but I htink he's ruined in that regard. :o)

3. Legolas is going to be stubborn, because that‘s part of who he is. But in this case, he can't help it. Poor baby.

4. Ricard thinks he will be all right now that Allaura is gone. I think he's right. I would like to see that stature turned to powder, but that is up to Ricard. Maybe he knows something we don't. Maybe it can't be destroyed, and he has to bury it.

You are forgiven, now where's my chocolate!!! :o)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 24 on 6/30/2006
Legolas will come back--he MUST! Interested in seeing how you handle this.

Author Reply: Are you so sure he will? I'll tell the plot bunny. I am, too. :o)

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