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| Impediment by Iorhael | 3 Review(s) |
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| docmon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/22/2005 |
| This was terrific! A bit of angst, a bit of suspense, a bit of action, and a nice happy ending. Nice way to end the day! It was nice to see a scenario where not everyone was enamored with aragorn becoming king. Just seems a bit more realistic. I liked how Frodo asked ARagorn to spare the kidnappers in the end. It felt in keeping with Frodo's character. nice job! Author Reply: Thank you! And sorry for not replying earlier. Yes, I think it will be thrilling to see how Aragorn's becoming a king might put his friends in danger. But the ending is actually donated by my beta. :) | |
| Frodo_Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/12/2005 |
| I loved it! A wonderfully dark, angsty story accompanied by dark chocolate 'Dark Side' m&ms, all contribute to a truly mysteriously dark mood! now if only it was night, and i had candles burning and a storm was raging outside...i'd be in the medieval times! yes, 1100 AD with a laptop. go figure. um, only thing is that i kinda felt frodo cried a little too much. i mean, he's Frodo, he doesn't cry all the time, but oh well. at least he devised his own escape. i forgive you. *shakes hand and hands precious m&ms...one, two, three, four, five, six...that's it. one of each color. be happy you got any.* they're mine, i tell you! Author Reply: Hahaha. You with your M&M dark chocolate. (Hey, I've never seen that before!) Oh, yeah. Sorry for the whiny Frodo. Will remember not to make him like that again next time. :) | |
| Daynawayna | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/12/2005 |
| wow.. what a great story! I really enjoyed this, Irohael. Interesting plot and well written. Poor Frodo seems to get the brunt of it in a lot of the stories I read here. :( Good Job. Thanks for sharing this with us! Author Reply: I can't believe I haven't replied to this! Thank you so much for reading btw. And sorry for tormenting Frodo. That's actually one of my hobbies. :( :) | |