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Seeing Without Believing  by Hobbit_luvr 6 Review(s)
Esquire_of_RohanReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/27/2008
I like this. You do need to write more!

ErinReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/29/2007
I like this! Please write more!

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/18/2004
I've read the book so I know he comes around soner or later. He does doesn't he? I'm beginning to worry about Merry. He is fighting so hard and getting nowhere. He better not give up! I don't think it was over-the-top. Seems to me to be a very unique look at what it might be like to struggle for conciousness. I hope Pippin talks to Merry some more and cries a bit less as the tears seem to be upsetting Merry more than they are helping. Where is Strider with "the hands of the king are healing hands"?

We need a medic over here!

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/13/2004
I like the way this goes back and forth between what Pippin is feeling and Merry's struggle as he tries to find his way out of his own mind. Write more soon.

Author Reply: :-D Thanks bunches. Again, wierder way to put all of it. I've been told kind of eerie, te he! I'm gonna try to write more soon!!!

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/4/2004
Very good image of Merry trying to discover where he is and how to return to Pippin. This is very well done.

Author Reply: Thanks! I was trying to make it different than ever version I've read and some that was just hinted at in Return of the King. Yay reviews! Tank u very much!

Lady JainaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/2/2003
I loved the insite into this particular part of the story! Very very good!

Author Reply: First reviewer! Thanks so much! Glad you liked how I wrote it, especially since I really need to get a Beta Reader! Thanks for the kind words, extremely helpfull to get me to write more!

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