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Sneezes and Sword Fights  by joannawrites 2 Review(s)
LynReviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/24/2003
Certainly, one of the funniest stories I've read! I can just picture
the two of them.

Oh, I'm sure you meant "vial" for the glass bottle of medicine
although equally sure that the Kig would say it was quite vile!

Excellent!

Thank you for sharing it with others.

Author Reply: Hi! Thanks for reviewing Sneezes and Swordfights and especially for catching that little "vile/vial" problem! Hee...I discovered I'd done it again in a later chapter that I had not posted yet so I was glad to see you caught it! That error survived me, my beta reader, and apparently everyone over at ff.net! Good eye, I appreciate it!

Thanks again for reviewing!
Joanna

LKKReviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/22/2003
A sick human is definitely no match for a peeved elf, even if the human is The Kig. Although apparently a peeved elf is no match for an elderly human healer! (I never would have thought that.)

Off to watch the next Round between elf and Kig. :-)


Author Reply: Hi there!

Just wanted to say thanks so much for reviewing, and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, because it was an incredible amount of fun to write, but it's even more fun hearing that people found reason to be amused by it!

Hope you enjoy the rest!
joanna

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