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| The True Face of Courage by FirstMate | 4 Review(s) |
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| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/25/2010 |
| anexcellent ending! I like the way you tied everything together. I enjoyed this story very much. Please write more soon! | |
| BlueEyedElf | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/10/2010 |
| All is right, indeed. That was a great ending, FirstMate! That was a sad story about Benny. Too bad everyone around him couldn't see what a toad he was. I enjoyed the mention of an angry Celebrian. I remember imagining in Elrohir's first cave incident that she would likely be less apt to forgive the two guilty elflings than Elrond. Poor Estel, vomiting in the bushes. I'm so glad he finally saw sense. I think it was probably necessary to tell him that graphic a story to drive the point home. A surly Elrohir was certainly interesting. I have to agree with Estel, though. It wasn't funny. It wasn't funny at all. Finally, poor Elrohir. He had to wake to the aftermath of another reaction he couldn't control. Luckily, he had the fortune of losing control in the presence of those who love him and will forgive him without reservation. Great job! I thoroughly enjoyed this, and it is always going to be one of my favorites (along with "Lost"). | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/9/2010 |
| Well done on getting to the end! Seeing that 'completed' at the end meant that I have sat and read from start to finish, when I should have been doing housework and shopping. Well written. | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/9/2010 |
This wasa wonderful ending to such a great story. Estel, truly did learn what courage is... Elladan and Elrohir, are both stubron, and that medicine did take it self out of Elrohir. Legolas was a good friend to all of them, just by being there... I loved what Estel told Elrohir about courage, it is such a true statment...Wouldn't mind hearing another story from you.... lovely... | |