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The Scruff Factor  by JastaElf 13 Review(s)
GalathilReviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/2/2011
Dear JastaElf I love this story and can't stop chuckling.Maybe Estel my stay tidy.What do you think? As for our three elven princes,a I'm glad that I'm not in their firing line.LOL Galathil.

MîdhaerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/7/2009
Look, I'm know I'm being picky here, but your Elvish grammar is all wrong. It's mellon nín not nín mellon. etc... Also tithen pen not vice versa. 'Kay?
Please fix these grammatical errors.


rickReviewed Chapter: 7 on 12/28/2008
Please please please do the sequel real soon now - this was such a hoot, I almost bust something from laughing too hard!

nediethReviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/6/2005
You did not fail to make me laugh in this one Jasta! In this one you made legolas so cute and innocent (looking), a side rarely explored in fanfiction except in young legolas fics. the descriptions were WONDERFUL, especially the clothing ones. I love clothes, not normal everyday casual clothes, but FANCY clothes. I don't get what most young woman today have with dresses and skirts, they actually give you more freedom than the "fashionable" jeans that are so tight you feel like your going to pass out. But that is extremely off topic. I also liked how you gave the various "side" characters, well, character! especially Erestor's, I don't think I've read anything where he has a good part ( I know there are several erestor/glorfindel fics, but I do not read slash). The humor was original, and a "return of the Scruff" would be most appreciated!

Nedieth, who finally got out the promised review.

phoenix23531Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/4/2005
By the Valar, you are likely to get me fired! I was reading this latest chapter while taking a quick break at work, and am going to have nasty bite marks on my tongue from trying so hard not to laugh! This was indeed a most wonderful, cheeky, devious ending to a fantastic tale. I simply cannot wait for the sequel! Please don't delay it's posting too long, I beg you.
heheheheheeee, the rest of my day is looking decidedly more cheerful.

All the best,

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/3/2005
Oh excellent! I've been out of town and returned to find this. I love the way you mix contemporary snippy language with the most regal of elven portrayals. And I want to hear the story of Elrond telling Thranduil to "stop that right now."

I like the way you've set up the Gimli & Legolas interaction too.

This was well worth waiting for, Jasta.

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/3/2005
Jasta, it was great to read this at long last! The poor twins - Legolas has run rings around them both, yet they keep coming back for more. I rather like the thought of a Sindar filling in a Noldor sandwich - I've read some interesting slash fics on that theme!;)


sofiaReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/3/2005
That was a fantastic story. Really made me laugh and I enjoyed it alot. Legolas is one clever elf. I didn't see that one coming. I'll be looking out for the sequel.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/3/2005
Poor twins - they don't stand a chance against the doe-eyed Moriquendi. A brilliant finale to a hilarious story. I'm not sure who it is that I sympathise with most - (twins, I think. They keep coming back for more without any realisation that they are outclassed.)

The idea of having them all gang up on Aragorn to see that he is in a fit state for the coronation and the wedding of the age is extremely appealing - and judging from the impression that movie Aragorn had actually managed to brush his hair for the first time before meeting his bride, they might actually have succeeded.

I look forward to seeing how they manage it!

French PonyReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/2/2005
I love it! Lord of the Rings as a screwball comedy! The tricks, the turns of phrase, the timing. . . brilliant!

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