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Childhood Shattered, Innocence Lost  by Baggins Babe 4 Review(s)
AntaneReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/22/2007
How loving to pick out toys for your baby brother or sister and very thoughtfully to. And what a tragedy to lose all three now, but also having the hope of seeing them again. That is very true.

Who will love you now? Oh, my dearling, do you have any idea how many do?

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/30/2005
I like your take on this very much. "Who will love me now?" Ah! Such a touching plea! It would break my heart. I do hope you'll continue this. Namarie, God bless,
Galadriel

HeweneReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/17/2005
Oh, you *are* trying to kill me here, aren't you? Lovely story here.

"Esme, can they wear the presents I was going to give them?"

Yep. Dead.

Hewene

Author Reply: I was a wreck by the time I finished this chapter. :-))
Glad you're 'enjoying' it though, and I'm not really trying to kill you. If this wasn't already in the story I would not have had the heart to invent it - poor Frodo goes through far too much anyway.

Breon BriarwoodReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/17/2005
*sob**sniffle* Poor Frodo...

First his utter grief, then trying to act so brave. You're breaking my heart!

Author Reply: Nearly broke my own writing this chapter! Hated having to put poor little Frodo through that. Hope to have some interesting adventures and encounters for him in future chapters though.

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