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Moriquendi  by fan81981 49 Review(s)
LegolasfanReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/11/2020
Hahaha sorry if I am this quite desperate. But at least I'm still holding on to this small glimmer of hope! I REALLY REALLY LOVE this story! IVE READ Moriquendi AND I WAS JUST SHOCKED IT WAS STILL UNFINISHED HUHU. THEN I CHECKED AND I WAS BOTHERED WHY IT TOOK MANY YEARS ALREADY WHEN YOU LAST UPDATED IT. THEN I CHECKED GOOGLE AND I SAW YOU ALSO POSTED THIS STORY ON 2 OTHER SITES. I WAS QUITE HOPEFUL, HOPING IT WAS FINISHED IN EITHER OF THESE 2 OTHER SITES. BUT IT WAS NOT. I WAS JUST REALLY REALLY HOPING AND PRAYING THAT YOU WILL FINISH THIS STORY BECAUSE IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND REALLY WORTH PUBLISHING! I KNOW IT HAS BEEN A DECADE, BUT I KNOW AND HOPE THAT THE STORY IS STILL WITH YOU IN YOUR HEART! I WOULD REALLY WISH TO SEE LEGOLAS AND RHINURE HAPPY WITH THEIR CHILDREN! PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAAAASE! THANK YOU SO MUUUCH! STAY SAFE!For now I'll read moriquendi over again. Love youuu

nonameReviewed Chapter: 39 on 12/27/2015
I never thought that thranduil would be such weak king and used his son as his property.
Then again, I never thought Legolas was so gulible that he would do anything his father said, such as improsining himself to a woman he did not love. Along, with doing anything she said.
You Aurthor are very creative, but you made my favorite characters to be weaklings in your story.

I hate it.

nonameReviewed Chapter: 39 on 12/27/2015
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ElentirgirlReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/6/2015
Hi :)

I have been reading your story today (started on my way to university) and I dare say, I am enjoying myself a lot :D
What an entertaining way to procrastinate!
From what I can see, the story seems to be complete, but still, keep up the good work if you are writing something else at the moment! And if not, I need to find a time machine to send you my encouragement!

Good eve!

ElentirgirlReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/6/2015
Hi :)

I have been reading your story today (started on my way to university) and I dare say, I am enjoying myself a lot :D
What an entertaining way to procrastinate!
From what I can see, the story seems to be complete, but still, keep up the good work if you are writing something else at the moment! And if not, I need to find a time machine to send you my encouragement!

Good eve!

anairamsaileReviewed Chapter: 54 on 4/23/2009
Fan,

Af all the fanfic stories I've read (and I've read some), yours it's undoubtedly one of the best in terms of writing style (you're truly an amazing writer) and definitely the best one in originality and richness of plot.

I have to admit that I love romances with our favorite elf, but grew tired of not finding something that really intrigued me as a reader and did not make me 'skip' over the text at one point or another of the story, just to get to the end.

In your story's cases, however, I've gone back a couple of times to enjoy the plot and to make sure the line hadn't been broken.

The characters are multi-dimensional. All of them (and you have many characters). And rich, and adorable, even the ones I don't particularly like (yes, I've got so involved that I 'like" some characters and 'despise' others because of my own perception of the good-guy/bad-guy),

Honestly, I could ramble on in this pitiful effort to pay you a compliment without really saying what I would like (that's why I admire writers so much). Instead, I'd like to ask you to keep writing and complete the series because it's a true pleasure to read your work.

Best of luck and blessings in all your endeavors.

shadowfaxReviewed Chapter: 54 on 1/17/2009
Hey this is seriously one of the best 'Legomances' (heard this term for the first time..lol) I have read till date. A Legolas, especially if he is in a crossover fic (usually with Harry Potter) is just so drop dead perfect...that the story just dies for you as a reader...lol. Not so with this fic, I love the inrticately woven plotlines and the differing outlooks, attitudes and cultures and totally different way of living and restraint that the Avari have.

Rhinure...one of the best Avari and their Sacrifice. Tragedy's child (nice different word for a ruler btw) and one of the most inscrutable and seemingly unemotional Avari and the one who is best at keeping her emotions at check and with the best degree of restraint....

And you have a Legolas seducing her. Quite delicious and you can't help but be lured in by this basic premise! I have loved all their interactions....they're quite sensuous yet funny, adorable yet amusing. :D

Also, the look into the lives of the Avari and how you have done the background info on them is very interesting to read and with their restraint on their emotions in public and their nomadic nature and the fact that they're always escaping from one tragedy to the other, and all the rest of their own private vulnerabilities and strengths and memories....it's all very fascinating to read!

Also the Hindi...haha...I was pleasantly shocked when I realized the Avarian language was Hindi! Plenty of the Hindi one-liners reminded me of enough Bollywood masala flicks to keep me amused. Your Hindi is nice enough even though its somewhat different from the "Hindi-in-Englishscript" that we use.

But where are the Avari names from? They seem unlike any I have heard.

But please do continue the second cycle! I liked your description of L and R moving circles around each others.

SamiraReviewed Chapter: 54 on 5/14/2004
To answer your question...I am a moroccan girl, but I live in Holland...So I live between 2 different culturs. Sometimes it is very difficult....just like the caracters in your story....

Samira

MissReviewed Chapter: 27 on 5/8/2004
This chapters makes it more interesting...why is it that the reminding of the kings wife disturbe Rhinure?? Why won't she wear the crown?
Are there more secrets that she hide from legs?
Very intersting it is!

Author Reply: I promise that your questions about Rhinure and Eruante will be answered - eventually. And yes, there are quite a few secrets she hides from Legolas - some are reveled in this fic and some you will have to wait for in the sequel. That is, if you are still reading.

Fan

SamiraReviewed Chapter: 54 on 5/7/2004
Damn! It's like a novel... Like I red a book from one hell of a writter! An amazing stroy! Not big at ALL, 'cause you made an impression of the whole idea. When I red this story I had an image in my head! That's why this story is one of my favourites!
The storyline is soo unpredicted, that's why it so exciting. You keep the reader non stop, reading your story in one day, or even let them leave their other responsiblities....(I can hear my mum now......oef not good...)
Anyways....( i hope my english is correct, heheh) i hope you finish this story! Update it very soon, 'cause I think many can't wait ( incl. ME) till they read the last chapter!

Love Samira



Author Reply: I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you do not get into too much trouble with your mom. I know mine can get quite annoyed if I stay on the computer for too long.

I found the story quite unpredicatable as well - it kind of creeped up on me. Hope you enjoy the rest as much.

Can I ask - are you Pakistani/Indian/South Asian? Your name is South Asian if I am correct. If so I think you might be the one and only South Asian reading this - other than myself of course.

Fan

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