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| Cell Block Tango by Saoirse | 4 Review(s) |
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| THEHHEHE27 | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/25/2005 |
| You clever,clever little thing. Who would have thought of doing that as the topic for the story?! Excellent! I loved it. "Merry," Pippin said a moment later in realization, "I think you set the house on fire." ^ Brilliant, that's all I can possibly say. Great Job Pip. =D Author Reply: Yay!! *claps with delight* I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You're my favorite Merry! Uh...I think I have a concusion...or however you spell it....I'm dizzzyyy. | |
| MaidenofValinor | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/6/2005 |
| How clever! Loved both chapters! I just love Farry and Appleberry! How cute! I must admit, I had no idea how you were going to do "Cicero". Very, very clever. I am very impressed with this story so far and can't wait to see how you are going to do "Lipschitz"! Author Reply: Thank you, Maiden :) I'm so glad you like the little tykes, I'm especially fond of them myself :P I'm gald that you liked how Cicero turned out, after all, as you said before, you were Cicero -- so it's good to get approval from an expert LoL! I should have the next chapter up soon (I'm hoping) I'm glad your enjoying the story enough to stick around for the next chapter! Thank you for the kind comments! | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/5/2005 |
| What did I just type? LOL My cat helped me with the review and so if you can't sort it out, I am dreadfully sorry. I loved how you put the song in this bit. I tired to type that before but it is a bit garbled. Little Apple makes more sense than I do tonight. LOL Author Reply: LoL! O, no, it's perfectly alright. Half of the things I type make absolutely no sense -- that's why I always end up having to go back over them a ba-zillion times, because I am never paying attention to what I'm typing (and I never *do* go over them, so it just makes me seem rather incompetent and foolish lol). It's alright about your cat (lol). At the moment, my cat is swishing her tail in my face/mouth/nose -- very unpleasant, and she doesn't seem to care that she is blocking my view of the screen. I'm glad you liked the story! I visted your LJ (I don't know how I managed to get there, I'm lost without a compass when it comes to anything remotely to do with computers) and it was so pretty! lol -- I read a story that you have there, I think you called it 'Strange Bed Fellows' lol which I *loved* (I'm a sucker for a good title), and I loved it! I don't know if you have it here on SoA...so I'll just tell you what I think of it here. I felt so sorry for Pip! LoL. But I really loved the conversation with Merry and Estella toward the end -- how lovely and touching! I thought it was so poignant how he was afraid she wouldn't be able to except him as the changed hobbit he was, how he didn't want to expose her to his hurts (but it also was rather *stupid* of him, of *course* she would, Merry!)But it was so wonderful to see him finally able to open up, it was obvious he was hurting and needed her comfort. And also I love the bit about how she had loved him since childhood (I'm remembering something to do with tadpoles...?) as I too feel that they must have known and then admired each other since they were very young. -- Well, great job on that! And thanks for reading! :) | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/5/2005 |
| LOL I love it! Her mum would have known what she was saying for the start. Mum's always know, but poor Merry! Too funny! I loved how you mamnage to work the sone in on this one. Estella will never leave Merry with the baby again after this one. | |