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| Battle of the Golden Wood by Marnie | 2 Review(s) |
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| Coriel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/24/2003 |
| I like the way you've marked the Elves' love for children. It seems they would have a soft spot for such. And the bear analogy was just what I would expect from someone like Galadriel. I hate to think what would have happened if someone had laid unwelcome hands on little Celebrian. ;) I can't see what else the Elves can do to prove their good will. Trust must come in time, I suppose. Considering their feelings toward the little ones, I can imagine the accusations against them in that regard are the worst. | |
| Orophins Dottir | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/14/2003 |
| The Rohirrim are nicely done, suspicious but still somehow open. They make a fine counterpoint to the elves in the perspective of the story. I like very much the "this twilight Lord" description of Celeborn. Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil | |