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Shadowed Light  by Avalon Estel 3 Review(s)
SilmaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/4/2005
And so it was, and came to be
in shadowed light I longue to Thee

But while the fairest of the elves
Lady Undomniel still dwells
in Middle-Earth, so long I keep
my grief inside, burry it deep

... ;)

Your poem moves me deeply, Avalon. Wonderful!






Author Reply: Thank you, and WOW! Did you write that? It was beautiful. Another poet, I see!

docmonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/2/2005
I really enjoyed this! Not only the tempo but the tone. It was filled with grief and longing. I definitely got the feel of someone looking at a glimpse of a world they'll never see. Wonderful job.



Author Reply: Thanks! The tempo was actually a little difficult to keep, and I struggled with this for about an hour. I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/2/2005
That is absolutely, utterly beautiful. You should be very proud of this. I was going to highlight the very best lines, but they're all amazing.

*awestruck*

Author Reply: Thank you! (blushes) That's really sweet. I don't really like my poems, so I appreciate your kind words.

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