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An Act of Desperation  by Shieldmaiden of Rohan 1 Review(s)
SimplegirlfromLPReviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/19/2019
Have been enjoying your story so much this far, but this chapter was a little painful to read. I found it difficult how everyone harped on Aragon’s departure. And I didn’t care for Eomer being so clingy towards Aragon. I understand that after having fought alongside each other at Helmd Deep, they would have solidified their friendship but these are warriors and I can’t imagine them lingering on the “why”, “what if” scenarios for too long. They would embrace the suck of the situation and get on. And aren’t the twins their to enlighten the group?

The moment between Eomer and Eowyn was nice. She’s his tender spot and that’s sweet.

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