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| The Way Home by Ithildin | 3 Review(s) |
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| TithenFeredir | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/10/2005 |
| Oh, this is a very nice vignette! You touch lightly on so many things as Elladan's thoughts flick here and there with his gaze. There are layers and layers to this story and it all feels very real. You describe the ship so well--the churning water slipping past the bow, the groaning oars. I also like the contrast of the twins' almost superstitious reaction and Gimli's open hostility to the sea-call, while Legolas seems drunk with it and unaware. This is very, very good. ~TF Author Reply: What a delightful surprise to find another review for my little story! The characters’ differing reactions to the Sea-longing and what it means for them intrigues me and I enjoyed putting myself into this moment to explore their thoughts and feelings about it. I’m glad it came across realistically to you. Thank you for your generous comments, they are greatly appreciated! Ithildin *( | |
| meckinock | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/23/2005 |
| I really enjoyed this story. It was understated and quiet, yet very strong. It was very evocative and yet spare enough to make every word count. The tightly focused POV and present tense were very effective. I felt that I got a sense of every character's mood and state of mind. A very thoughtful and intriguing look at the opposing forces pulling at the sons of Elrond. The memory of Celebrian was especially heart-wrenching. It must be horrid for Elladan to imagine choosing never to see her again! Author Reply: Meckinock, I am delighted that you enjoyed the story! Writing in present tense just seemed to ‘fit’ this story, though it did make it a bit more challenging and I was concerned that I might not pull it off. So I am pleased to hear that you felt it worked! I think the twins must have felt a strong pull towards making the same choice Arwen did; else they would not have delayed so long in choosing (though, personally, I am convinced they sailed in the end!) :-) Thank you so much for your kind and detailed review, Ithildin *( | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/22/2005 |
| I like this very much. I know I've read it elsewhere, but can't recall where - at HASA? Anyway, it was a lovely glimpse into Elladan's thoughts as he pondered the sea longing and its effects, the choice he and Elrohir must make (and YES, they will make the same choice!), and the weight of destiny Aragorn faced. The memories of Celebrían were sad as well. I like the differences you draw between the twins and Legolas - Tolkien shows us that E2 are not men, yet not elves either, but most other writers ignore those contrasts. Well done! Jay Author Reply: Thank you, Jay! Yes, you did read it at HASA and I very much appreciate your thoughtful comments. The contrast between the Half-elven and the Elves is fascinating to me, as is the Sea-longing, and I’m glad the comparison came across well. I think the twins know deep down that they will choose alike, but Elrohir was a bit nervous until Elladan reassured him that he felt he was free to choose either way. I enjoyed writing the piece and I’m extremely happy that you enjoyed reading it! Ithildin *( | |