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True Journey is Return  by Lyllyn 1 Review(s)
daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/6/2003
I love the beauty with which Elves invest their possessions, even things like weapons. I suppose if you have endless time, it's worth paying such attention to beauty.

"Gundor looked at the younger man with mixed pity and exasperation. Hathil was a good man, and would grow to be a better one, but had not seen the shadow take hold in another." These are very nice lines.

And so is this one: "The stranger smiled again, and his face lit; joy seemed to dwell there, as if only waiting for brief clouds to pass so that it might shine forth again."

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