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Ocean Wide  by Hobbit Lass21 3 Review(s)
OtterReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/14/2005
Wonderful....dreamy. Very good. You're better at writing than me.

Author Reply: Am not. It still makes me blush to read this story. What good is good writing if you can't even read it?

DaffyReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2005
I forgot to leave a review before! It's beautiful. I can't wait until the Day!
(((((((huggles)))))))))

Author Reply: Me neither!! Thanks for readin'!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/2/2004
I love the image of his baptism. Am not certain Luthien could have come to him, as she'd passed into the uttermost West with Beren; but it is very well written and very evocative.

Author Reply: Yeah, I suppose not. I probably should've checked my sources more thoroughly. It was just a thought. It came at like 11:30 at ngiht, so, what can you do? Thanks for reviewing!

Author Reply: I've changed Luthien to Celebrian, just to make everthing clear.

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