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Frost and Thaw  by fliewatuet 2 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/1/2004
Lovely chapter. I think Savea has made up her mind.

It seems a rather cruel way to treat orphans, but I suppose it's not an environment that can support passengers.

The Sandulven seem to be providing a good omen.

Author Reply: Yes, the treatment of orphans is cruel in a way, but I think it is less cruel than in other societies that pretty much left them on their own. Here, they are at least given the opportunity to show their worth for the community and profit from their own efforts in turn.

You seem to be on the right track as far as the Sandulven are concerned :-)

Thanks for the review!

fliewatuet

robnrunReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/30/2004
This is a fascinating exploration of a little known bit! The quality of the dialogue is very well done, by its cadence one is given a definite impression of it being a different language.

Author Reply: Wolfwind bids me tell you that she is mightily pleased that the language-thing works for you. I am glad as well that you like our story. Thanks for the review.

fliewatuet

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