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Healed  by shirebound 13 Review(s)
tamieReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/19/2004
I love this story!! I esspecially liked the fact that Galadriel, Celebrian and the hobbits were having a picnic under the tree "Celeborn". LOL!!! LIttle hobbits are soo cute and lovable...just so hugable.

cpsings4himReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/18/2004
Shirebound! Guh!!!! I love this story so much!! This chapter was so sweet and lovely!

QUOTE:
“Pippin,” Merry said with utter certainty, “we will know each other. How could we not?”

Pippin smiled and leaned his forehead against his cousin’s. “You’re right,” he whispered. “How could we not?”

~Oh! Indeed! How could they NOT?!? ~

QUOTE:
“It is Yavanna who would need to give permission to disturb the tree,” Galadriel mused. “Perhaps...”

“So you believe that even the Valar would be charmed by our little ones?” Celebrían chuckled

~But of course! Who WOULDN'T be?!? ~


QUOTE:
“Yes,” Celebrían replied. “I long to see my own children, and always will -- but the hobbits have helped to heal my heart. I could not love them more.”

~Aww! *happy sigh!* This part actually made me tear up! Hobbits! Good for what ails ya!~

And I loved the bird at the end!

Can't wait for more!

Thank you!

Blessings!
cp

NivinaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/18/2004
I sooooooo love this! I fear I repeat myself... but you bring me so much joy with this tale. *sighs happily and hugs you* :)

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/17/2004
This is just so touching. Beautiful. Soft. You write Elvishness well indeed. There is growing a grace in this that is hard to describe.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/17/2004
Love the older hobbit / younger hobbit contrast. (Why do Merry and Pippin get to go this time?)

An image I love - Bilbo running everywhere. He was soooo old and now he has been youthed.

Connie B.Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/17/2004
Oh, I love it, loveit, loveit! I just want to hug and squeeze the toddler hobbits, especially my beloved Pippin.:)

Please say this is going to be longer than just four chapters.

I love Merry's protectiveness, even as a small child.

Now I'm just giddy. I think you perked up my whole afternoon.

Thanks.

Connie B.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/17/2004
I love the way you started out with the older Merry and Pippin, apprehensive about forgetting each other, and then when they had reverted, how protective Merry was of Pip, even though now they will be the same age, and not have an eight year gap between them. I notice that Bilbo, Frodo and Sam are now children. So how much "older" (in practical terms) are they than wee!Merry and wee!Pip? And I noticed a few hints that someday far down the line, they might remember their old lives--that would be good if they could without pain.

EllaGReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/17/2004
Awww! How sweet! I love toddler hobbits!

AuntiemeeshReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/17/2004
I love how reassuring and certain Merry is that he and Pippin will know each other after the change, but then after the change comes, it's Merry who is frightened and needs reassurance. And of course, Frodo knows exactly what to do.

Part of me thinks it's sad that they are unable to remember each other from before, although of course that's the only way this could work, but I know they will all love each other just as much now, and forge new memories of each other.


GiuReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/17/2004
Hey! I am sorry that i havent been reviewing your fanfics for a while, but with the IB and all the work i have for school it is just not possible. however i want you to know that i am reading your stories as much as i can, and that i follow their evolution with a lot of attention... but i promise ill try to review as mich as i can from now on, but it will be hard...

Anyways thanks for sharing your work with us... you're still one of my favorite LoTR authors. keep up the good work *thumb up*

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