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Mortal Memories  by LOTRFaith 5 Review(s)
TamurilReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/2/2004
I am crying. I can barely see what im tyoing. NO fair making me cry.
Very good story.

DuchessReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/1/2004
You changed it for me? *awed* Wow! Thank you... *not sure what else to say to that* :)

Okay, is Legolas letting go, truly grieving and healing now? I really REALLY hope so!

Thranduil doesn't want to hurt his son any more than the poor thing already has been, but maybe thanks to the twins he won't have to. *crossing my fingers*

His ailment is that heart is literally being ripped in two? Ouch! Don't think that would make him cough up blood, but hey, who says Elven anatomy is EXACTLY like that of Men? ;) This is your story, write it as you see fit. *vbg*

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/1/2004
Poor Legolas! That's a lot of deaths to watch. Most of us mortals take for granted that we'll see those older than us die and many if not most of our age mates, but for an elf that would be a new experience outside of war.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/1/2004
It is not as I would have envisioned it, but it is indeed your story. Congratulations on doing well with it.

-Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/30/2004
i love the way you portray legolas and how emotionally attached he was to his friends and how he never really understood ot accepted the concept of death. that was really great. don't take too long for the next chapter

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