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Flickers on the Water  by Soledad 3 Review(s)
DikaReviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/15/2006
Fine story. I like it that you don't picture Feanarioni as monsters. Just one small thing: Maedhros had only ONE hand.

Author Reply: Yeah, I know he only had one hand. Apparently, I got carried away with the dramatics. *blinks sheepishly* Sorry...

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/15/2006
Beautifully short, to the point. Well done. I do indeed believe that saving and loving those children had to have been good for Maglor. I will continue to follow this work with much interest. Best Wishes.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/9/2006
I'm so glad Maglor put his foot down!

Feanor is responsible for a lot - and the mess he made of his sons' lives is high on the list. (And Maedhros and Maglor somehow seem more tragic than the brothers C... And as if they have more character than the brothers A...)

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