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| Lose Him by FrodoBaggins_88 | 1 Review(s) |
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| Periantari | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/15/2007 |
| I think you can expand upon this a bit more... i really liked the premise of the story but i think it could've been a bit longer and could flesh out the details a bit more. :) I enjoyed hearing about Sam in potential danger though ;) | |