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| Chain Reaction by Estelle | 4 Review(s) |
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| Elven Queen of Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/4/2004 |
| I do like to follow your story, though I sometimes think it's a bit short in describing the scenery. I think you could take more time, let the scene and its characters develop a little further. Up to now only little is known about the slavers, for example. Author Reply: Ahh, thank you for the review :) Please do keep in mind that each chapter was written by a different author and we can't go into too much details so as to leave some space for immaginations :) And some authors are amateurs writing for the first time so please be lenient on us :D I hope you'll continue reading. :) | |
| Nikara | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/12/2004 |
| Oh dear. Now those two are going to get themselves in trouble. Why am I not surprised. More soon please! Author Reply: Oh you are probably correct. When are those two ever not in trouble? *eg* But what kind of trouble? That's for us to know and for you to find out. LOL!! | |
| nessa | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/12/2004 |
| plase do keep going with this story Author Reply: With every intention :D | |
| Timmy2222 | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/12/2004 |
| OK, finding Aragorn and Legolas will not be it, right? I wonder what the twins will face once they get closer. You keep the tension rising... - T. Author Reply: Hehehe. Well, somehow I don't think the twins will be able to free them all by themselves. Hmm... *g* | |