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This Ereinion  by Levade 2 Review(s)
LyllynReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/12/2004
Very nice characterization, and I like the way you translated the uncertainty of the ocean into the uncertaintly of raising a child. The lack of beta didn't leave many errors, but I spotted one sentence, "Oh, he wished it was." where the tenses didn't seem to match the sentence before.
Forgive the nitpick, the story is charming!

Author Reply: Thank you, Lyllyn! I've missed your eagle eyes and company these past few months! Nitpicks are as welcome as compliments. :)Especially as I know how dear your free time is. Grazie!

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/11/2004
I was skimming through the Silmarillion today, and came across a number of passages showing where Cirdan fought with Turgon and Fingon, and where Finrod came to his aid. I had forgotten how much Cirdan had to do with the sons of Fingolfin and Finrod. Anyway, the more I think about it, I think of how hard it had to be for Fingon to send Ereinion away to the Falas, where I am sure he hoped the child would have the most chance of growing up. Cirdan may wonder why him, but I was strangely comforted today in what I read that he was a good choice. I hope he found young Ereinion a good lifelong endeavor.

Are you going to continue this - the council for more Little!Ereinion fic wants to know :)

Author Reply: Thanks, Nilmandra. I don't know, but the way life has been going I think I might be putting the quill up for other pursuits and letting you lot go on with the storytelling. *bows and grins* Thanks though!

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