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In Between the Moon and You  by Little Stone 1 Review(s)
Lily FrostReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/30/2004
Lovely!

I find the rain very refreshing and don't understand why people complain about it so much. It's very nice to kiss someone in it.

You have a good grasp of emotion, and the dialogue and descriptions are very well done.

Thank you for sharing, and don't worry about writing angst; so long as it isn't to melodramatic. Many authors here write angst, at least sometimes.

Peace out,
Lily Frost

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