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The Livery Saga  by Elendiari22 2 Review(s)
Hai TookReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/6/2004
That was too funny! I laughed from the time Legolas proclaimed "It's not my fault" to the last line about forgetting things when hobbits were involved! There were so many little lines that I loved and added the right spirit to the whole thing! Aragorn only warning them because he knew that hobbits would only retaliate if he were to punish them! I can't wait to read more about this livery that is giving Pippin such problems! Thank you for the laughs!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/6/2004
'So, the King and the Elf were both afraid of the hobbits.'

Well, they had had a lot of experience of the level of chaos that a few small hobbits could create. Fear is a wise reaction. If Faramir had greater knowledge, he would have shared it.

'Once again, he was absurdly tangled up, but had managed to get both his tunic and his trousers…off.'

Drunken, semi-naked hobbit. I do hope Aragorn et al retrieved the clothing from the light fitting - (although I would have feared that Minas Tirith light fitting + clothing would = fire).

Author Reply: Thanks! And fear is a *very* wise reaction where hobbits are concerned. :)
*I would have feared that Minas Tirith light fitting + clothing would = fire*
I had kind of pictured the lighting fixture to be like a chandelier, therefore enabling hte clothes to be away from the candles. I just couldn't find the right words to describe it!

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