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Mosaic  by Alassiel 2 Review(s)
AntaneReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/3/2008
Very interesting and true.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

NerdanelReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/26/2004
This is a beautiful portrayal of all the Valar, in a concise, poetic style. My favourite part is the beginning - it flows so well: "Breathing, kindling, nourishing, shaping, dancing, mourning, weaving, flowing, hunting, laughing, dreaming, weighing, healing, gladdening marring."

The last word is like a death-knell. Wonderful job.

Nerdanel



Author Reply: This was the first piece of fan-fiction I had the nerve to post. I hope those who inspired it will send me some more, as I am even more intrigued by them than I was four years ago. Thank you so much for the review, my friend. Blessings, Alassiel

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