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| Black Mountain by White Wolf | 8 Review(s) |
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| buffipie | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/17/2004 |
| Hi, I really enjoyed your previous story and so I decided to check this one out as well and after reading chapter 6 I just had to leave a review. I don't normally review but this chapter was really really good! I love the atmosphere that you created, it was very creepy and Legolas finally coming face to face with those creatures was quite chilling! I'm very much looking forward to reading the rest of this story. :) KC Smith (buffipie) | |
| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/25/2004 |
| *gape* MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor baby. Poor x....I don't know; I'm running out of numbers. POOR BABY!!! The howlers give me the creeps. :D Excellent job! This thing has been very spooky from the very beginning...I can't wait to see how it will unfold! MORE SOON, PLEASE!!!! Author Reply: Welcome back. I haven't heard from you in a while. Yes, poor baby. Legolas is in a bit of a pickle right now. It only gets worse, so you'll have to come up with some new numbers. I'm glad you find the howlers and the story in general creepy and spooky. I had hoped everyone would. Thank you. There will be more very soon. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/16/2004 |
| Legolas certainly appears to be in trouble! The scene in which the creature bit him was horrible. Author Reply: In this case, I'm afraid appearances are NOT deceiving. I tried to make the creatures as horrible as I could, especially with all those awful teeth, so having one bite Legolas just seemed to be the next logical thing to happen. | |
| Galimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/15/2004 |
| OHHHH! Those shivers are back!!! How do you do it, even Stephen King can't do this to me! Legolas has found some werewolves, right. Please don't let them eat him!!! Galimeril ;D Author Reply: Saying Stephen King doesn't' give you shivers like this is quite the compliment. Thank you very much. Nope, not werewolves. But gee, they're hungry! :o) | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/15/2004 |
| I really don't like the sound of those nasty creatures - they sounded fairly yuk, moving to very yuk when they showed their teeth and mega-yuk when Legolas tasted them. I'm rather worried that swallowing yukky-creature juice might do unpleasant things to our wonder-elf. Not to mention having been munched by one. Elrohir, Elladan and Aragorn need to come to the rescue pretty darned soon if you ask me. Author Reply: I'm so glad you find my little creatures yucky. That's what I was going for. I tried to picture what would scare me on a narrow cliff. I like your term 'creature juice'. Whether that juice causes a problem remains to be seen. :o) OUr other three intrepid adventurers are going to do their best. | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/15/2004 |
| Well, Legolas is in a bit of a bind. I do hope he will find his way out of it. Author Reply: Knowing me, you can say it is more than a bit. :o) He's certainly going to give it a try. | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/15/2004 |
| good chapter. The suspence is great. I wonder what the others are gonna do? more soon please -sofia Author Reply: Thank you. The others will definitely be be on the move. More soon. | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/15/2004 |
| Oh dear. This does NOT sound good. What are these things? Somehow, I can't imagine E, E & A waiting around helplessly for much longer, either - so what will happen to them? Jay Author Reply: No, I'm afraid that it isn't at all good. The creatures' identity will be revealed as the story goes along. And E, E, and A won't be stationary for long. | |