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In The Forests of the Night  by Fionnabhair Nic Aillil 2 Review(s)
BKBReviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/10/2006
I'm so glad to see that you are continuing to revise your earlier story. It is a great improvement and I hope that you feel, as I do, that it is worth the efforts.

It's a logical development to have Eowyn acting as the "older" and more experienced comforter to Arwen in this situation that involves the loss of loved ones. It also allows A & E's relation to grow as A learns that there are some things that humans many understand better than elves.

Thanks again, BKB

BKBReviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/10/2006

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